I have a dream
Prácticas de redacción 2015/2016 Grupo A - Subgrupo 2
viernes, 1 de enero de 2016
Introduction and Conclusion
Introduction
The importance of playing instruments and listening music for Childrens. From my point of view this action have a lot of benefits about them cause help to concentration and stimulates their brains to have the capacity to do a lot of things in their lifes,therefore they will be more eficients in the future. Playing instruments it is very relaxing for childrens with problems so they can relax themselves and learn something different at the same time.
Conclusion
Relaxing and concentration in childrens it is very important so we should encourage them to try this.
Fear of ...
Fear of losing someone important for me
Fear of drown
Fear of loose my dog
Fear of can´t move
Fear of diseases
Fear of stay alone
Fear of murderers
Fear of stay in a Submarine
Fear of have an accident with my car
Fear of Cockroaches
Fear of falling in a deep hole
Fear of becoming crazy
Fear of forget all my life
Fear of people lie me
Fear of fake people
Fear of a war
Fear of have enemies
Fear of dinosaurs
Fear of death
Fear of losing my friends
Fear of haven´t someone who love me
Fear of hospitals
Fear of snakes
miércoles, 30 de diciembre de 2015
Describing someone
The person I am going to discribe it is my husband. I met him eigth years ago.
He is a beautiful person inside and outside himself. Phisically he is green eyes,mid blonde hair and quite pale in winter but lucky for him he take a bronze colour in summer.
He is a man with a big heart,patient with people to explain something or understand people in general,he pay attencion over all things he is interesting,is very clever but he prefers to play videogames so it is difficult for him to really concentrate in something.
In conclusion he is a beautiful person for me and very friendly.
He is a beautiful person inside and outside himself. Phisically he is green eyes,mid blonde hair and quite pale in winter but lucky for him he take a bronze colour in summer.
He is a man with a big heart,patient with people to explain something or understand people in general,he pay attencion over all things he is interesting,is very clever but he prefers to play videogames so it is difficult for him to really concentrate in something.
In conclusion he is a beautiful person for me and very friendly.
martes, 22 de diciembre de 2015
Describing places
This place,from my point of view it seems very relaxed. I think this place could stay in Ireland where there are a lot of cliffs. This picture could be from a beach and it seems very cold,i think it is winter a cold season in this place and the water will be very very cold. This place make me feel very relaxed and it is the perfect place to reflect about your life and leave your mind for a moment.
I can see a lot of water breaking in the rocks fiercerly and a lot of rocks skirting the coast.
I see the colours of the earth. Brown,black,white and blue and a little pink-purple in the sky.
I think that is a beautiful place to rest.
domingo, 6 de diciembre de 2015
Fast food and childrens - Problem/Solution paragraph
Today we haven´t time for nothing,we have to go to our jobs, go to school,extra activities etc..
Because of that parents often have to resort to fast food for them and their children. It is easier that cooking when you arrive home after a hard day at work or pick your children up the school. Actually Tv and media give us a lot of solutions in fast food to do our lifes easier but it is not the correct way to stay healthy.
If we want to stay healthy we must start including a good nutrition in our lifes,but it is more important that children know that a good nutrition it is very important for their lifes because they are the most affected as they are constantly watching on tv adverts from Mcdonald´s, Burguer King and they are happy to go to this restaurants as much as be possible and they must to understand that not is the correct way. In my opinion they should have a subject in school about nutrition and probably there would be fewer problems with obesity.
Animals for adoption Outline
I. It is the right way to finish with the animal´s abandonment.
II. Advantages of adopting an animal.
1. you give a second chance to an animal that have had a bad experience.
2. you don`t buy a dog while there are thousands abandoned in the streets.
3. if you don´t buy any animal in a shop,breeders will not continue raising.
III. More adoptions - Less puppies abandoned.
1. It isn´t necessary to buy a puppy in a shop
2. There is a lot of people in animal welfare that give in adoption with necessary things to avoid other abandonment.
IV. Consequences.
1. People are not psyched about have animals.
2. sometimes they are not prepared and they neglect the animal.
V. Conclusion.
People should adopt more and buy less
domingo, 22 de noviembre de 2015
An Essay - The right animal for each family
At the moment it could say that each family should have a particular pet according the members of the family. Ages, sexes , number of children , number of resposibilities , how much time members stay at home,kind of jobs etc .. according to this information there is a kind of pet recommended for them. I am going to show two examples.
First , we could think in a family of four members, parents and two childrens over 3 - 5 years. In this case we could have some possibilities, normally when there is children in a house they prefers a puppy because for them it is like an alive toy but parents normally they aren´t sure for that because are a lot of responsibilities for them so they aren´t confident about their children. On the other hand responsibilities are good for children when they are growing so from my point of view it would be a good point. But parents at this ages prefer a rabbit or a guinea pig,certainly they are a good pet for children,especially guinea pigs because they have a good character.
Second, we propose a couple who they are just moving in together,they are alone, no children and they want a pet for them. In this case,the ideal pet would be a dog because it would be like a baby for them and pay a lot of atention in it,on the other hand they should have a kind of job in wich they are a part of the day free to stay at home or go for a walk with the dog.In this case it would be the perfect pet for them. Finally I must say that everyone can have the kind of animal they want but first they must think about the kind of life they have.
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